Yes, You Do Need a Theme

Last week we looked at the need to ditch all the back story in our first scene (well, actually the first fifty pages, but we are focusing on just your first scene right now). Now we’ll take a look at another essential element that you must develop right away and that’s theme.

Do you really have to have a theme for your book? Not necessarily in a formal sense, but think about theme as some essential take-away thought you want to leave your reader with when they finish the book. Theme speaks to your plot, but more so to the heart of your story. One way to get to your theme is to ask yourself just why you are writing this book, anyway.

Do you have a message or something you want to say to your readers, some commentary on life, society, government, faith, or some other issue? Even if you are not trying to push a “message” per se, your book should be about something.

If you think hard and can’t come up with anything even barely important, meaningful, or significant about the story you want to tell, maybe you shouldn’t be spending all these months writing this novel. Maybe that sounds harsh, but if you’re not moved in some way by something in your story, then just why are you bothering to write it?

If you’re just writing a page-turning thriller or a straight genre mystery or suspense, you might not need an overarching theme. You might still write an exciting book that entertains.

But this blog isn’t aimed at writers just seeking to pump out genre mass-market books without heart. It’s not for writers just writing to make a living and that’s it. This blog is for writers who really have something to say, and that’s exactly what we’re dealing with right now—honing and paring down what you want to say in a phrase or two.

 Say It in One Sentence

If you were asked to tell someone in one sentence why you wrote your novel, what would you say? Can you think of something to say that will make the listener nod and say, “Wow, that’s interesting (or needed or pertinent or important or . . .)”? If you can’t think of a significant take-away statement, then you might need to stop writing and start thinking. Because a book without a theme is like a day without sunshine. (How does that saying go? I think it’s from a commercial about orange juice . . .)

 Your theme or point—what the reader is getting into and why she should care—needs to be hinted at in the first page or two. A tall order? You bet. But if you can determine clearly why you writing this story and what is the one thought, message, idea, conclusion, or feeling you want your readers to take home with them when they finish reading your book, you should be able to give some indication of this through your protagonist—by action, thought, or dialogue—in those first paragraphs.

Whatever that is must be set up in the first few pages, even if just a hint of a promise of what to expect. If your book is about forgiveness, then something about forgiveness or lack thereof must be an important element of your opening scene.

You may not agree with me that your first scene should have at least something that hints at your theme, but I beg to differ. I feel the great books “out there” that have stood the test of time do this in some way. Bringing a hint of your theme out right away also clues the reader into what the book is really about, and reveals a bit of the heart of your story, which is what I’m all about.

 Share a Scene

This week, take a look at the opening scene of a few of your favorite novels. Pick novels that you recall having a great opening scene. But this time as you read through the pages, pay particular attention to the hint of theme, the take-away message being set up early on. Great books showcase their theme from the start, however subtle. And it can be subtle, for sometimes you almost miss the implication of what’s to come—a hint of the heart of the story coming through that will become full-blown by the end of the book. Some books that come to mind right away to me are The Prince of Tides (Pat Conroy), My Sister’s Keeper (Jodi Picoult), and Peace like a River (Leif Enger). Can you think of some novels you’ve read that convey the theme in the opening scene? If so, please share them in the comments and feel free to tell us a line or two that worked for you.

 

10 Responses to “Yes, You Do Need a Theme”

  1. Daan Spijer January 19, 2012 at 12:27 am #

    Is this invitation also open for me to submit the opening lines from a novel I am working on?

    • cslakin January 21, 2012 at 5:28 pm #

      Sure, I will be inviting everyone to share a line or two from their work.

  2. Betty Kurecka January 19, 2012 at 6:45 am #

    I’m really looking forward to the comments on today’s subject. I totally agree with it and realize that might be one of the problems I’ve had with the novel I’ve been working on for over 6 years! Perhaps why I haven’t been motivated to finish it yet managed to finish the first two (which have themes — I just didn’t realize it until now. lol)

  3. Tess Harding January 19, 2012 at 12:51 pm #

    Nice article. One of my all time favorite books is Catch 22, and in the third paragraph (paras 1 and 2 being only 1 line long) Heller outlines the entire theme for his book in a few short lines. Wonderful. Point made.

  4. LK Watts January 20, 2012 at 4:56 am #

    Great post! Very thought provoking! I think this element can be very subtle in books at times, and you don’t always realise you need to think about a theme when you come to write your own book.

  5. Annis Cassells January 21, 2012 at 7:58 pm #

    Cutting for Stone: Abraham Verghese gives us the theme in his prologue. Family; searching for knowledge and understanding of one’s own place and how family members fit with and impact one’s life. “According to Shiva, life is in the end about fixing holes. Shiva didn’t speak in metaphors. Fixing holes is precisely what he did. Still it’s an apt metaphor for our profession. But there’s another kind of hole, and that is the wound that divides family.”

  6. Laurie Evans July 9, 2012 at 11:17 am #

    Great post! I have to go dig out my copy of Prince of Tides, now.

  7. LK Watts November 10, 2012 at 10:49 am #

    I know I commented on this blog at the start of the year but now I’m commenting with a different angle. I’ve just typed 5,000 words on my third book and I have to say the theme is absolutely vital. If you don’t have a theme, you don’t have a story in my opinion. How can you possibly know which direction you are headed? The theme creates questions which must be answered.

  8. cslakin January 26, 2012 at 10:11 am #

    Thanks for sharing that link where my post is mentioned. They have some great links on that site for writers.

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