Pop! Goes the Weasel (Word)

Due to great demand, I thought I would give you a partial list of my “weasel words.” These are words I overuse and are often unnecessary and clutter up my books. I will go through, usually when done with my first draft and do a “find” for these words and destroy them! (Although, sometimes I do need one or two and after much deliberation will vet it and allow it to remain.) You should come up with your own list, but I bet some of your words are the same as mine. One way to learn what your weasel words are is to ask your critique partner or writing group to point them out to you. Invariably, we cannot see our own. I have often muttered to myself “I can’t believe I used that word again!”

Okay, here’s my list. Feel free to comment and share some of yours.

  • • just
    • have to
    • could
    • would
    • began to
    • started to
    • it
    • it was
    • there was
    • were
    • very
    • rather
    • some
    • thought
    • wondered
    • mused
    • had
    • -ly [to find adverbs]
    • -ing [to find progressive construction]

31 Responses to “Pop! Goes the Weasel (Word)”

  1. Marissa Farrar July 20, 2012 at 1:27 am #

    I use autocrit to find all my over-used words. I’m currently putting my 100K m/s through the program 1000 words at a time. It’s a tedious but necessary process. ‘Know’ and ‘felt’ are two words that always seem to crop up, even when I think I’ve written a weasel-word free piece!

  2. Laura July 20, 2012 at 8:25 am #

    Ha! One of my pet peeves. I keep my list posted up on the wall, so I never forget…

  3. Angela Ackerman July 20, 2012 at 8:40 am #

    “Just” is my nemesis! LOL, great list. 🙂

  4. PatriciaW July 20, 2012 at 8:59 am #

    That
    Continued
    So
    But (A, but B sentence structure)
    Although
    Gaze
    Glance
    Smile
    Nod

    I recently came across this blog post with a good list of words to add to this list. Words Writers Should Delete

  5. Paul Golden July 20, 2012 at 9:19 am #

    mine include:
    now
    surely
    ultimately
    had

    • Pamela Shropshire July 28, 2012 at 12:46 pm #

      “Had” is my arch nemesis.

      • cslakin July 28, 2012 at 12:53 pm #

        I find most writers leave out had when they need it (they are using past tense instead of the needed past perfect). however, when you revert to back story or a flashback, you do need a “had” in the first and last sentence, to clue the reader when the flashback is starting and stopping. But in the middle of all that, you don’t need “had.” Here’s a great page that explains the difference and when you must use “had.” http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/pastperfect.html

  6. Bobbi Hughes-Millman July 20, 2012 at 12:21 pm #

    Ha! I catch myself doing this all the time. I need to post a list as you suggest. Great article!

  7. Elba July 20, 2012 at 9:09 pm #

    This is one of the best sites on writing tools and this post in particular is too good. I did this exercise and lost nearly 200 words. Well worth it. Thank you. I hope you are putting all of this advice into a book?

    • cslakin July 20, 2012 at 9:23 pm #

      I’m putting the year-long writing course from the blog, Writing the Heart of Your Story, in book form in November. I probably won’t compile all the Say What entries until there us enough to make a book, but in the meantime you can always print them out and put in a folder!

  8. Barbara July 22, 2012 at 5:45 pm #

    About a year ago, a member of my critique group read through my manuscript and commented on my overuse of “that.” I ran a Find on the word and found 1125 occurrences. Ouch! I’ve watched my usage of that ever since. I even wrote a blog post about it. Thanks for the reminder.

    • cslakin July 23, 2012 at 8:12 am #

      I did a post a month or so back just on “that.” Check it out!

  9. Melissa Maygrove July 23, 2012 at 5:46 am #

    Great post!

    These are some of mine (although I’m getting good at not writing them to begin with): suddenly, almost, slightly, nearly, just, which, that, rather, quite, really, very, began, going to …And filter words: thought, realized, saw, heard, felt…

  10. cslakin July 23, 2012 at 8:14 am #

    Great lists of words. By the time I add all these and go through my books I may not have a novel any longer. Cut down to short story size? But really–your novels will read much faster, cleaner, and jhabe a nice crisp feel after you purge all the weasel words.

  11. Tom Bryson July 23, 2012 at 8:36 am #

    Great advice – interesting how many recur. Here’s some on my list:
    Seem(s)nearly somewhat most was maybe every nod watch look was are feel walk move do can wait mobile/cellphone practice/practise just really quite perhaps that it there gaze saw OK/okay little pretty very almost appears probably…and the -ly words.

    Tom Bryson

  12. Astrid Bryce July 25, 2012 at 10:42 am #

    Thanks for sharing your list. I have many of the same words, so I am printing off this list and posting where I write.

  13. Tony July 26, 2012 at 12:57 am #

    Great timing, thanks.

    For me, this is usually the last or second to last step. Edits, proofing, culling the scenes that are no longer needed and incorporating feedback from my beta-readers all come first, then the final polish – killing off the weasels.

    The more books I write (finishing number 6), the less frequently they pop up but, not surprisingly, they still exist. I’m two weeks away from that step. Will bookmark this page for reference.

    Thanks again.

  14. Urban Mommy August 5, 2012 at 7:17 pm #

    yo! couple more:

    * nodded
    * shrugged

    • cslakin August 5, 2012 at 7:34 pm #

      Nothing wrong with using these from time to time, but many say “nodded his head” (what else would you nod?) and “shrugged his shoulders” (shat else would you shrug?), so I often tag clients and let them know they need to leave the extraneous words out. I find the most overused physical description/action is “he smiled.”

  15. Nandish Sood August 7, 2012 at 9:32 am #

    Oh kittens yes. This is the exact reason I was
    born. To find you, my long lost blog writing soul-mate.

  16. Terrie Wolf (@AKA_Terrie) August 7, 2012 at 4:08 pm #

    Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. ‘Nuff said!

  17. Pamela August 23, 2012 at 10:38 am #

    Excellent list, as I found many of my own contained in the original posting, as well as several others (so, although, surely). I’ve printed this out for a reminder!

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  19. Frances Brown November 30, 2012 at 8:30 am #

    What do you do if you’ve run out of different ways to refer to an item in a manuscript? Is it ever acceptable to use “it” or is IT a big no-no? In a piece I’m working on now I need to refer to a book several times in the same paragraph. Book, novel, text, tome – ever acceptable to just say “it” when it’s obvious?

    • cslakin November 30, 2012 at 10:13 am #

      Sure, you can use it a lot if its clear what you’re talking about (I just used it two times in that sentence). But you also don’t want to try to use a different word for something every time you refer to something. Like, in a paragraph you don’t want to say book, novel, manuscript, tome, work, etc., just to make sure you are not repeating. Better to rewrite sentences so that you don’t have to keep mentioning the subject over and over.

  20. Janet Givens December 1, 2012 at 12:07 pm #

    Thank you for some excellent reminders. I’ve just found you (thanks to Twitter) and will surely follow you. My little weasel word, which I haven’t seen posted yet, is “all.” Janet

  21. Tami July 6, 2013 at 2:57 pm #

    I’m new to writing, attempting to write my first book and I am learning so much from great articles like this. I am finding myself using the word ‘as’ constantly but am not sure how to stop!

  22. Ashley August 1, 2013 at 10:41 pm #

    I write non-fiction, so mine are
    – of course
    – for example
    – in fact.

    Must strip them out!

  23. Angela D. Meyer July 1, 2014 at 5:20 am #

    Each story I write I find new words I overuse! But there’s always the usual to watch for. I think everyone has been looking at my list.

  24. Veronica Marie Lewis-Shaw April 20, 2015 at 10:12 pm #

    Was… that… rather… the… I, when writing in first person… sure,there’s more.

    A couple of my characters, English isn’t a first language so contractions are not used as often as they could be. It’s been commented on.

    It is a process, right?

    Great list… I shall have print it out and add my words.

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