How to Come Up with Motifs in Your Novel

Motifs are powerful elements that writers can take advantage of when constructing their novels. But few novelists ever give thought to adding motifs. They might do so subconsciously or inadvertently, but I’d like to encourage you to take some time and deliberately construct some motifs so that they serve as superglue in your story.

We looked briefly last week at what a motif is, and how it differs from theme. However, the best way to bring a motif into your story is to tie it intrinsically into your theme. We looked at The Hunger Games and saw that not only does author Collins use an actual object or thing—the mockingjay itself, and the metal pin Katniss wears—the “song” of the mockingjay is used symbolically. The characters adopt the bird as a symbol for their revolution, and so the object and the theme are bound together.

Generating Ideas for Motifs

Once you work to develop the themes in your novel, you can create some motifs. Think for a moment about your theme, what your story is really about (using mind mapping can help with this!). What images come to mind that might represent your novel? I’ve talked at length about image systems and why they’re helpful for novelists. When creating an image system, one thing that might help is to envision a movie poster for your novel.

Ask: What key moment in your entire story would best be shown on your poster? What colors and objects would be shown? What would the characters be wearing, holding, doing? By imagining this movie poster, you might get some ideas for strong symbols that you can work into your novel, even if you’ve already written your first draft. The great thing about motifs is you can add them in after you think you’re done with your novel.

Come Up with an Object

Think about your protagonist. Imagine one object she owns that is special to her. Maybe it’s a gift someone gave her that has great significance. Maybe it’s a shell she found on the beach on an important day in her life. You can find a place to introduce this motif-object early on in the book, then show it again a few times at important moments in your story, and then bring it into the final scene in some symbolic way. All your character may have to do is pick up the shell from off the table and look at it and think about it. She might perhaps recall the pivotal day she found it, and how she felt back then, and how she’s changed since then. That is a very effective use of a motif.

Objects can spur not just memory but powerful emotion, so if you have an object connected to a very important moment in a character’s past (whether something painful or joyful), you can then springboard from there to infuse this object with deep meaning.

Move from Object to Concept

To take it further, using the shell as an example, you could have multiple connections with this object so that not just the shell itself is a symbol or triggers a memory. Perhaps a concept can be formed around the object and brought out. What can a shell represent? Maybe you choose a barnacle that clings tenaciously to a rock to survive, but the harsh waves have broken it free from the rock, and now the creature inside is dead. If you have a character whose life has been shattered by a horrific event, and she’s now lost and floundering, dying inside, that shell can take on heavy symbolism.

What if you choose a sand dollar (I use one in my novel Someone to Blame as a motif), which is sometimes thought of as a symbol of hope, or to represent redemption, salvation, or restoration of faith? Or you could choose an oyster, which creates a beautiful pearl due to a speck of sand irritating its tender flesh. If your character can “relate” in some way to this shell—if it can reflect or represent something significant to her—you have a powerful motif. An oyster is pretty ugly to look at, but inside a thing of beauty is created out of pain. Right there can be found a lot of symbolism for a variety of story types.

Reinforce the Motif

Take that last idea one step further. If a character feels ugly, unworthy of love, and then is given a string of pearls by the man who comes to love her, this reinforces the motif.

A client of mine had a weak title for her novel, and also needed something to superglue her story to take it to a higher level. She had an early scene showing her main character, a young Russian girl, who was given a cheap bracelet by her drunk mother’s unfaithful lover. Angry at her pathetic lot in life, this girl throws down the bracelet and breaks the links of the chain. Her life at this point is shattered. By adding a scene near the end of the book showing her adoptive mother in the US giving her a fine quality link bracelet to represent her love for her new daughter, the symbolism is brought out. The title was changed to Scattered Links (author Michelle Weidenbenner), in order to drive home this motif of the bracelet and the links. The word link also becomes charged due to its association with the character being linked to new family members and friends, and breaking and repairing the links to her past. As a result, this good novel became a great one, and went on to win some prestigious awards.

So spend some time thinking about your protagonist. What is her biggest emotional issue? What is the lie she believes about herself and can’t get past? What is her core need? Can you brainstorm a list of ten or so items in her life or past that could be symbolic for her?

Freewriting and Word Association

One thing you can do is a word-association exercise. Write down an emotion or thematic component from your novel, such as grief or forgiveness. Then freewrite all the words and images that come to your mind without censoring what you write. Picture in your head your character grieving. Where is she? What does she see? What does she touch or hold? What comforts her—a song, a picture, a place?

When finished, go over your list and see if you can grab two or three of these items and find ways to give them a place in some scenes. Perhaps your character can find this object. Or see it in a store window. The possibilities are endless, but the key to all this is 1) it must have emotional significance for the character 2) it should somehow tie in with your themes, and 3) it should be simple and clear in its symbolism.

Let’s say you have freedom as an important theme. You may have chosen “bird” as one of the words that came to mind when freewriting. A bird is a common symbol for freedom, and, hence, a good one (using universal symbols that many people share is a good thing). A caged bird represents imprisonment (on any level—actual, emotional, etc.).

Do you remember the best seller Jonathan Livingston Seagull? I thought it was pretty corny, but it sold more than a million copies and topped the New York Times best-seller list for thirty-eight weeks. It was even made into a movie. The novella featured a seagull named Jonathan (who knows why—perhaps to symbolize the “ordinary man”) who is a member of a flock in which individuality is frowned upon. Jonathan finds himself a loner and an outcast. After performing feats of tremendous courage and skill, he is expelled from the flock. This gives him the freedom to develop his skills, and in so doing he reaches a heaven of sorts. The lessons that Jonathan learns in his travels reflect both a greater peace of mind and a freedom to be himself.

Although this book was an allegory (and a bit over-the-top preachy, to me—but hey, that was the 70s!), featuring a young seagull’s efforts to rise above the ordinary, it can teach us something about the power of motifs and symbols.

You don’t have to go whole-hog into allegory to make powerful points in your novels, however. Just using a few well-developed and meaningful motifs can add that cohesion and depth your novel might be lacking. Why not give it a try?

What is your main theme for your novel? Can you come up with one object to use as a motif? How can you expand that to other levels? Want to share in the comments?

Inspection Checklists:

Inspection Checklist 1-concept with a kicker

Inspection Checklist 2-protagonist with a goal

Inspection Checklist 3-conflict with high stakes

Inspection Checklist 4-theme with a heart

Inspection Checklist 5-Plots and Subplots in a String of Scenes

Inspection Checklist 6-Secondary Characters with Their Own Needs

Inspection Checklist 7-Setting with a Purpose

Inspection Checklist 8-Tension Ramped to the Max

Inspection Checklist 9-Dialog Compressed and Essential

Inspection Checklist 10-Voice Unique for Each Character

Inspection Checklist 11-Writing Style Concise and Specific

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12 Responses to “How to Come Up with Motifs in Your Novel”

  1. Philippa Rees December 10, 2014 at 2:32 am #

    Another really worthwhile post.

  2. Wendi Nitschmann December 10, 2014 at 4:54 am #

    Love this! I started my WIP with the idea of incorporating lightning bugs, of all things, and wrote a scene with them in it. I knew I wanted to end the book with something about them, but I didn’t consider using them a bit more along the way. Thanks for such an enlightening (haha) post!

    • cslakin December 10, 2014 at 7:56 am #

      Have you seen the movie Dragonfly? That is a terrific use of a motif–it has many different meanings in the story and I think makes the movie transcend. Your lightning bug can be powerful due to the symbolism of shining light in the darkness. Capturing them in a jar, making them captive, in order to illuminate. Lots of great potential!

  3. Michelle December 10, 2014 at 10:43 am #

    Thanks for mentioning Scattered Links, Susanne. You really helped me zoom in on this approach and once I did the entire story felt more cohesive. Thanks for all you do for authors!

  4. Rebecca Vance December 10, 2014 at 7:19 pm #

    This gave me a great idea! Thank you! What do you think of roses as a motif? My protagonist was a child actor, and at 7 years of age, went to her first award ceremony where her father and uncle won Best Director. There were red roses all around in celebration. The next morning, they are found stabbed to death, in their beds with rose petals strewn all over the room. Then, throughout the book, have some different color of rose appear, now and then. Maybe black ones to foreshadow a plot event? Would this work, or would it be too heavy-handed?

    • cslakin December 10, 2014 at 9:06 pm #

      Roses are a great motif because of so many emotional associations with them. You can overdo it, so choose the moments carefully. I aim for about 5-6 references to a motif but if you do way more than that, yes, I think you could be whacking readers over the head with roses!

  5. Dennis December 10, 2014 at 8:54 pm #

    One of my themes is about people needing to have a change of heart. I need to find different ways to infuse the heart symbol throughout. Thank you for all these great ideas.

    • cslakin December 10, 2014 at 9:03 pm #

      You’re welcome. Lots can be done with heart as a motif, so you should have fun with this!

  6. Morgyn December 13, 2014 at 10:09 am #

    Any hints re when the 12th checklist will be available to download. Love your new Shoot Your Movie!

    • cslakin December 13, 2014 at 10:17 am #

      Next week! And the book will be done and published in March, with a huge additional amount of information to go deeper into all these pillars, as well as tips on how to brainstorm these ideas. Stay tuned!

      • Morgyn December 13, 2014 at 10:19 am #

        Yay! Will go on my to buy list soon as you let us know.

  7. Mary Ellen Lives December 22, 2014 at 8:45 am #

    I didn’t realize this was to be a book, but then I came late to the party. I’ve already learned a great deal from your posts and look forward to reading the book.

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