Here are some more excerpts from my new book, The Memoir Workbook. If you’ve thought about writing a memoir, you need to think about how you will protect yourself and others from emotional or legal harm .
You may not have considered that writing about your life could be a dangerous endeavor. The degree of danger could vary from emotional distress to legal action to threats on your life. Hopefully, your story won’t put you in anyone’s crosshairs, but for some baring the truth, it has done just that.
But for most people beginning the journey of writing memoir, the greatest threat is to their own heart. And from their own heart.
As noted in the Introduction, a journey into the heart can open the door to pain, anger, hurt, and other emotions. While it may be natural to shy away from reliving painful experiences, if you want readers to feel any intense emotions you felt as you went through those moments, you will have to dredge them up yourself and articulate them to faithfully convey them and help readers empathize with your experiences.
Here are three bits of advice on this matter:
- Remind yourself that these are only memories. They are void of power. They are like a shadow, not the substance, of past pain. You have already survived. You are already victorious. You control the story.
- Keep readers safe by protecting them as they read. How do you do that? By signaling early on, in various ways, that you are now okay. That what you went through may have been hard, yes, but you came out the other side and they can too. Inserting phrases such as “I did not yet know that after all that . . .” can help prepare readers for a possibly difficult read.
- Another way to protect your readers is by avoiding getting too graphic. That, of course, will be subjective, and sometimes the best way to know if we are giving too much detail about painful experiences is to bounce those chapters off of friends who are willing to read and give honest feedback.
Memoir or Novel?
If you feel you can’t tell the whole truth in a way that will be impacting without causing trouble for those who played a part in your story, you might consider writing a fictional memoir or novel.
While this requires much study to learn how to structure such stories, it may be worthwhile to you to pursue in order to get your story and themes across.
I felt a strong desire to tell the story of my mother’s betrayal of my family. It was a horrible time in my life, and it nearly destroyed my husband. I knew writing a memoir was out of the question—I feared violent retribution. (If we are writing about dangerous people, we have to take care to protect ourselves and our families).
I knew the take-home message my story was centered on this: that to live a healthy life, we sometimes have to cut toxic people out of our lives entirely—even if they are close family members. In my case, I had to distance my mother from me and my family. We moved hundreds of miles away to get out from under her influence. I also had to take legal action for protection.
Instead of writing a memoir, I decided to write a novel, but, as a novelist, this wasn’t a daunting decision. As was recommended (by a lawyer-writer friend), to avoid trouble, I changed these three key elements of my story, and this might be something you’ll want to do.
- The names of the “characters”
- The location in which the story is set
- The profession of the characters
Now that I was creating a novel, I added in fictional elements. Conundrum is 95% autobiographical and tells the story of a woman’s attempt to solve the mystery of her father’s death that occurred twenty-five years earlier, but in her attempt to do so, family lies and treachery are revealed that almost destroy her in her search for truth.
Almost every detail in the novel is true, drawn from my life. The inciting incident is my brother’s attempt to kill himself, and that prompts “my character” to go on a search for answers to puzzling family mysteries.
The story ends at transformation, and though I turn it into a murder mystery (why not? No one ever discovered why my father died), the story is resolved at that point because of the character arc: Lisa, my heroine, has the courage to finally break free from her destructive mother, heals the breach in her relationship with her husband, and is on the road to healing and happiness, painful lessons learned.
Weigh the Risks
Writing your memoir may be risky in some way. When Shannon Hernandez wrote her memoir Breaking the Silence: My Final Forty Days as a Public School Teacher about her battle with the New York City Public Schools, she figured she would never get another job in that city again.
Yet, she also knew how important her story would be to the teachers, parents, and administrators in that school system, exposing the failures and negligence that was causing educators to leave the field in great numbers.
Through writing her story with brutal honesty, not only have readers responded enthusiastically, her book is bringing national attention to some of the problems with public education and shedding light on some awful things going on behind closed doors. She weighed the cost of candor.
Some stories need to be told, and while the telling may negatively impact us in some way, we feel compelled to tell it. Writing from a place of fear is never a good way to proceed. Our first obligation, should we forge ahead, is to the truth of our story, and that means not censoring ourselves.
As you begin to write, you may have two opposing voices in your head: the one that begs for the truth to be told and the other, the critic, warning you not to speak.
But no one is making you tell your story. Take time to think it through. Count the cost. Even if you change names (and use a pen name), some people will know you wrote about them, casting them, perhaps, in a bad light, and they may never speak to you again.
But let’s take this a step further. Are there any legal implications when writing memoir? Can someone sue you for writing about them?
If you are in any doubt about the legal backwash should you tell your story, seek professional legal advice.
But here are some facts:
Memoir writers rarely get sued, and if they are, it’s either for defamation of character or invasion of privacy.
Defamation is the claim that what you’ve written is untrue and that you are spreading lies with malice. If what you are writing is true (and maybe you can even back up the facts, if pressed), the person you’ve upset might be angry but won’t be able to win a lawsuit against you.
You can’t be sued for your opinion. Maybe your Aunt Sally doesn’t like it that you portrayed her as a gossip and nag, but you’re entitled to your opinion—even between the covers of a published book.
And because we all tend to color our memories a bit due to our emotions, placing a disclaimer on your copyright page might head off potential problems. You might say the events that are recorded in the book are those you remember to the best of your ability, though others may have a different take on those events. And that you mean no harm in anything you say.
An invasion of privacy lawsuit implies you are revealing things about a person that doesn’t have legitimate “public concern.” However, when you share experiences many people can relate to, this often justifies public concern or interest, and even gossip and smut—such as is said about some celebrities—can be (sadly) construed as justifiable public interest.
Again, this can be a tricky situation, so the best way to avoid potential lawsuits is to get permission first from the people you plan to write about. And if that isn’t possible, as noted earlier, change enough details so that the person won’t be easily recognized by her or those who know her.
Another way to avoid these pitfalls is to always couch your “claims” as opinions and not conclusions. There’s a big difference between saying “My ex-husband was a drug dealer and made a fortune selling meth on the streets of San Jose” and “My guess was that my ex . . .” or “It appeared to me that my ex . . .” or “At the time I concluded that my ex . . . though I was never certain.” Do you see the difference?
If you are going to tell a truthful memoir, then tell the truth. Don’t embellish. Don’t exaggerate. Don’t use your memoir as therapy or a place to ramble about any old thought (that’s what your journal is for).
You can’t tell a powerful story if you’re afraid of hurting people. As mentioned above, if you need to, change the names of people and places in your story. Tweak minor details to keep from exposing those who might be adversely affected by the things you write about them. But don’t avoid diving into the bad, ugly, and hurtful.
The Memoir Workbook provides both thought-provoking questions and samples from memoirs to help aspiring memoirists to brainstorm, organize, and write their story. It includes many writing prompts and writing-craft tips designed to provide the basics for writing memoir in a cinematic style. Rather than tell the story of a time in your life, consider bringing those moments to life using fiction techniques (some call this creative nonfiction).
While The Memoir Workbook can only go so far with teaching writing craft, it touches on some of the important elements of fiction story structure, dialogue, and “character” presentation.
If you’ve been puzzled about how and where to start your story, this workbook will lead the way! You can buy your copy (paperback only, because you need to write in it!), HERE on Amazon!
What about you? Have you thought of novelizing your story instead of writing a memoir? Who are you writing your story for and why?