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Writing Mechanics: Scene Structure as a Mini Novel

Writing Mechanics: Scene Structure as a Mini Novel

December 2, 2015

This month we wrap up our yearlong look at the 12 Fatal Flaws of Fiction Writing. Editor Rachel Starr Thomson…

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Actions Speak Louder than Dialog Tags: Using Beats in Writing

Actions Speak Louder than Dialog Tags: Using Beats in Writing

November 4, 2015

 This month our editors are taking a hard look at pesky adverbs and “weasel words”—our Fatal Flaw #11. Even a…

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Writing “Personal” Description through Your POV Character

Writing “Personal” Description through Your POV Character

October 7, 2015

This month our editors are tackling Fatal Flaw #10 – Description Deficiencies. Too many manuscripts are lacking essential description–of characters,…

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Telling the Whole Story: Fiction and the Problem of Underwriting

Telling the Whole Story: Fiction and the Problem of Underwriting

September 2, 2015

This month our editors are going to tackle Fatal Flaw #9—Underwriting. We looked at the perils of overwriting early in…

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Dialog Writing 101: Conversational Mechanics

Dialog Writing 101: Conversational Mechanics

August 5, 2015

This month our editors are taking a hard and tough look at Fatal Flaw # 8: Flawed Dialog Construction. Dialog…

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How Fiction Writers Can Ramp Up Tension and Pacing

How Fiction Writers Can Ramp Up Tension and Pacing

July 1, 2015

This month our editors are going to tackle Fatal Flaw #7—Lack of Pacing and Tension. Rarely are fiction writers taught…

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How Writers Can Be Storyshowers instead of Storytellers

How Writers Can Be Storyshowers instead of Storytellers

June 3, 2015

Editor Rachel Starr Thomson dives into our new monthly fatal flaw: # 6 Telling, instead of Showing, Story . Writers often…

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Whose Head? Point of View in Fiction

Whose Head? Point of View in Fiction

May 6, 2015

This month we begin looking at Fatal Flaw # 5: POV Violations. Fiction writers often violate POV (point of view) “rules,”…

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Weaving It In: Backstory in Fiction

Weaving It In: Backstory in Fiction

April 1, 2015

This week editor Rachel Starr Thomson tackles Fatal Flaw #4—Too Much Backstory. In this month’s posts, we’re looking at the pitfalls of dumping…

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