History as Mystery

We’ve gone over some nifty things about character in the last few weeks. Hopefully by now you have gotten a great glimpse into how to create a complex, driven character. If you missed the posts, take a look and read through them. I’d like to add some more insights about character development today and get you to think about history as mystery.

I mentioned how it’s not all that helpful (or interesting) to spend time creating the outward attributes of your character, for what really shapes a person is their history. I showed how by creating and exploring a character’s past hurt or wound you can determine the way she looks at herself and the world. When your character believes lies about herself and her world because of this hurt, she creates a persona that’s not her true self. And when someone is not their true self, they feel restless, unhappy, and lost. Which spurs them on their journey to find their essence. It’s the place she needs to get to, and her journey through the novel is not just aimed at her reaching her visible plot goal but also her spiritual goal of embracing her essence or who she truly is. Remember the sixties and how we were all about “finding” ourselves? This is the same thing but without the drugs.

Create Some History

So, once you’ve established this key, pivotal element or incident (or series of incidents) that have made her who she is at the start of the story, you’ll want to create some more history. With that major task out of the way, the next step is giving your characters an entire life. This doesn’t mean you have to write or know every single second in their past. But you want to create enough of a past that they fill out. And the events and history you create need to be homogeneous with who they are now as well as fit in with your plot.

I really love Elizabeth George’s book Write Away. She has a whole section showing how she freewrites about a character, and I think she’s spot on (okay, she writes British mysteries so I had to say that). I take her writing advice seriously because she’s one of my favorite authors and a terrific writer. And nobody, at least in my opinion, writes better characters. So I want to be like her! She has a prompt sheet that she uses to do a workup on each main character. It lists things like core need (heard that one recently?), ambition in life, gestures when talking, age, best friend, strongest character trait, weakest trait, hobbies, what she does alone, and other details both physical and internal. She also lists “significant event that molded the character” (which is a variation of my “wound caused that makes them believe a lie”). She also reprints a number of pages that she typed while freewriting about a protagonist in one of her novels. Which is what I’m suggesting you do.

Getting to Know You

Take some quiet time, just you and one of your characters, and get to know each other. Start writing about her. Let the words flow and don’t edit yourself or censor. Start talking about who she is, where she came from, what she thinks and cares about. Just ramble. As writers we know all about creative inspiration, and we experience it (hopefully often) while we write our scenes. Call it muse or divine inspiration, but freewriting, like journaling, can draw from a deep well of experience and emotion. Things just float to the surface of the mind when you do this, and I will guarantee that some of your best ideas for your character will come through this exercise. You are delving into the mystery of your character, and this exercise will bring out their secrets.

James Bell has a different suggestion that’s a variation of this exercise. I tend more easily to do this character work in third person, as George outlines. But his idea is to write in first person and let the character talk to you, emote, rant, go off anywhere she likes. You may want to do this for an hour, or a number of times over days. When I wrote Intended for Harm I decided I would give each character one full day of my attention, and so as I went through my day, not just while sitting and freewriting and ideating but also while making dinner and vacuuming the house, I conversed with and meditated on my character and let them grow organically. I think that’s a great word to use because I don’t believe you can force a character to appear in all her fullness in a few minutes. Like a good stew, she needs time to simmer so the flavors can come out. (Okay, that’s a weird simile but, oh well).

Interestingly (and what I love best about writing fiction!), at some point the characters become real to you. As your personality and needs and fears and passions start infiltrating into your characters, you start to care about them. If you are starting your novel and you don’t care at all for all your main characters (including your antagonist), you haven’t done enough homework. I can’t stress how important this is. Doing or not doing this work might mean the difference between an okay novel and an amazing one. And who wants just an okay novel? Not me, no way.

 Reduce It Down

Of course you aren’t going to use all the material in those fifty pages you wrote. Go through and highlight the key lines that work great in characterizing your character and pick the bits of history that make her the unique person she is. You may only use a small bit in your novel, and maybe almost none of all that history you wrote. So why do it? Because knowing your character’s history will show even if you don’t write about it.

Trust me, it’s true. You can tell when someone truly knows their character inside and out, even if they tell you almost nothing of their past. You need to know all that because it will shape how you write her in every scene–her speech, thoughts, movements, choices, etc. At some point you will feel you are ready to tell her story. I always know when that moment is. And if I’ve done my work and planned out my novel (which involves those cool charts and index cards), I’m good to go. Do I ever get writer’s block? Never. Really. I never have. And it’s not because I’m so amazing, because I’m not. It’s because by the time I’m ready to start, I am so bursting with story and theme and character that the story just spills out. I believe you can be the same if you do your prep work and resist beginning until the pieces are in place. Think about it for your next novel.

This week, for this novel, if you’re in the middle or doing a rewrite (or maybe now you see you need a rewrite), take one character who you don’t feel is very complex or deep and do some freewriting–either in first or third person. Let yourself write about not just what you already know about her but all kinds of other things from her past and what she feels. See if anything you write is good enough to merit a place in your novel.

5 Responses to “History as Mystery”

  1. Evelyn Puerto September 5, 2012 at 6:07 am #

    This has been a great series of posts on writing characters. I’ve often wondered how some authors manage to bring fictional characters to life, and your advice on freewriting and developing personal history seems to be a great technique. Thank you so much!

  2. Stacy Green September 5, 2012 at 6:49 am #

    Love this. I firmly believe character sells a story, especially a series of any kind, and this type of prep is so essential. Thanks for putting it all together in one place for us!

  3. Tom Pope September 6, 2012 at 3:59 pm #

    CS,

    I just returned from running a session of my fiction workshop where I dealt with this issue.

    Scene-The character Beverly is driving out of town and can’t stay in one place since her parents died a year ago.

    Question-How does the writer suggest quickly that Beverly’s problem with failing to finish parts of her life came from the past?

    I suggested the writer could have Beverly toss a half-filled notebook into the back of car, and place it near the guitar she learned to play. Beverly then has a flashback to think about the completion of the learning about the guitar compared to the failure to complete the notebook’s course from school. Beverly realizes that she possessed a desire before the parents died when she learned the guitar, and that the desire left her when took the school course.

    This fits into showing the history of the character. Let me know what you think,

    Tom

    • cslakin September 8, 2012 at 2:34 pm #

      It’s always best to avoid back story or flashbacks (see my post on hold back the back story). You can have her thinking about her parents, about how she is restless and moving from place to place. You can show her in dialog with her landlady who is complaining she didn’t pay the rent and has only been there three months and is now moving out, asking where she is going, and she could say she doesn’t know. You can show her stress, show her driving aimlessly, crying, thinking about how lost she feels without her parents. what you mention is good too. Using dialog, thoughts, and present action is always stronger than doing a flashback. She might think of something her mother said to her before she died that has stuck in her head, but not show a whole flashback. Make sense?

  4. Toi Thomas September 8, 2012 at 2:26 pm #

    This is great. I actually do this already. The truth is I thought it was odd that I just couldn’t feel my characters were real until I developed their history. As for all the material I don’t use, I usually blog about it.

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