The Sensitive, Passionate Story

When you read a novel and you sense the passion behind the story, what does that look like? Do you ever start reading a book and feel it’s flat and formulaic, like the writer wrote it in his sleep? At very least, you can’t imagined he cared much for his story, or stayed up late nights writing because of the excitement coursing through his veins.

I often quote a particular line from a movie (I think it was Rich and Famous, so if you know the source and I’m wrong, please enlighten me!) that has stuck with me through my decades of novel writing: “If your writing doesn’t keep you up nights, it won’t keep anyone else up either.” I think the highest compliments a writer can get (and the ones I love the most regarding my own novels) are when readers remark that they stayed up all night reading the writer’s novel, unable to put it down.

That’s not implying your writing should be keeping you up because you just can’t make it work or you are stuck or it’s just plain terrible. What I feel that line means is the writer is so passionate about the story he is telling that he can’t stop thinking about it, and he can’t sleep because he just has to put on the page all the wondrous words that are aching to get out. Or something like that.

Can we write like that every moment we sit down at the computer and dig into our story? Not likely. I think you’d have to be some kind of manic maniac to be able to rev up with that kind of enthusiasm every time. But I do imagine there are some writers who come close. Is that something we should aim for? I’m going to say no, because I think the emotional and energetic side, to put it one way, doesn’t always serve us best. There are times when we have to get quiet and think. Or not think. Times we have to problem-solve and talk to ourselves, untangle tight knots in our plot (or back).

So maybe passion doesn’t look like excitement all the time. Passion can also look like dedication, persistence, patience, meditation. To me, it has many faces. But the result  . . . that’s the key.

So What Does Passion Look Like?

So what does passion look like in writing? These are some of the things I notice in books that scream passion:

  • A delight in the language. Maybe it’s just me, because I love words and playing with language. I love a beautiful turn of phrase. I can tell when a writer really loves words, and delights in crafting sentences that are perfect. Amateur writers and writers lacking passion tend to lean more toward the cookie-cutter or formula-type way of structuring sentences and scenes (and plots). The writing may be functional, sufficient, well-crafted, but it all lies on the surface, like a sheen. There is no depth. I know—a lot of best sellers are like this, and a lot of readers want those kinds of books. They’re not looking for passion. To me it’s kind of like the difference between fast food that fills you up momentarily and a classy meal that really satisfies (and the memory of that meal lingers).
  • A delight in rich characters. As writers, I feel, we should be fascinated by people. Humans are complex, contradictory, confusing, erratic, surprising, hilarious, vicious—and the list goes on. Writers should capture the human condition in all its weirdness. So, passionate writing loathes stereotyped characters. If you are passionate about your characters, they will come alive and pop off the page. They’ll do and say odd or crazy things that might even surprise you. You will delight in delving into both their good and dark sides, and you’ll feel compassion for even your most evil antagonist. I might venture to say that I can tell when a novelist really loves her characters and has infused her passion for them, which manifests in the things they do and say, and transcends the nuts and bolts of the plot.
  • A delight in storytelling. I mentioned this in my last posts. When you read a riveting story, you can sense the writer is enthralled in the story herself. She’s not just plunking down the words she thinks will fit nicely, they way you might work a jigsaw puzzle. She’s enamored with the process of telling the story, perhaps in the way humans have told stories from the dawn of time, the simple intent of connecting to a reader or listener and getting them just as excited about the story. Passion, to me, is having a story to tell and the pressing desire to share that story so others can be moved by it.

Passion may not be why you write. Writers write for various reasons, and many of those reasons are valid and not to be judged. I have friends who pump out novels using formulaic structure, and they are not a bit passionate. They are making a decent living by what they do, they support their families, and they are perfectly happy doing this. I think that’s terrific . . . for them. And it may be terrific for you as well. Writing, like many other vocations, can be just a skill or a job, and perhaps this type of writer is just as happy and fulfilled as the “passionate” writer. There is a need in many marketplaces for skilled, nonpassionate writing, and someone has to do it. (Think of all those computer tech manuals!)

But someone also needs to write those passionate stories for the readers waiting for such novels. And maybe you are one of those writers. If you want to be one, you need to stir up your passion for words, for your characters, and for storytelling itself. You need to push away all those encroaching voices within and without that pull you away from your passionate core.

Next week I’ll explore some practical ways we can successfully do just that, and I hope you will share your ideas on the topic!

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  1. I love this post. I had a particularly strong reaction to one sentence: Passion, to me, is having a story to tell and the pressing desire to share that story so others can be moved by it.

    I didn’t know this was true for me until I read it here.

    I am an editor, doing mostly non-fiction but trying to move more into fiction. A few months ago a friend said, “well, if you want to understand the challenges novelists face, you should try writing some fiction.” Well, duh! But I’d never written even a short story. I never even have an idea for a story.

    I decided to take a crack at it anyway. I’m currently 45,000 words into my first novel, and having so much fun I can’t believe I’ve never tried it before.

    And yes, I do feel an increasing passion to get my story out: out of me, out into the world. Who knew?

  2. This is a wonderful post. I had never thought too much about passion, but all your examples of how it should be (and how, too often, it is) are right on. I am happy to say (when I’m not sleep-deprived) that my characters keep me up way too often, and they’ve been known to keep other people up, too. I could never write without passion. I tried once, to write a “commercial” book, and after a few chapters just threw it in the trash. I now only tell the stories that get me in a headlock, drag me to the keyboard and insist on being told. Any story with less inspiration, less determination and yes, less passion, need not apply. Thanks for a great post!

  3. You made me realize that I need to flesh out one of my characters–her passionate reaction to her situation needs more explanation. Because: Humans are complex, contradictory, confusing, erratic, surprising, hilarious, vicious—and the list goes on. Thanks.

  4. You said: “…you need to stir up your passion for words, for your characters, and for storytelling itself. You need to push away all those encroaching voices within and without that pull you away from your passionate core.”

    That’s exactly what I needed to hear today. It’s so easy to let the passion get choked out by the weeds of the to-do list. Thanks for the encouragement to stay focused on what matters!

  5. This reminds me of a Stephen King quote:

    “Talent is cheaper than table salt. What separates the talented individual from the successful one is a lot of hard work.”

    I think most competent writers can left-brain their way through a decent novel, but creating something really memorable requires diving into treacherous and murky waters of the right brain to find the passion at the bottom and not knowing if you’ll surface.

  6. Fantastic post. It can be so difficult to keep the passion during long writing projects. But I agree that readers can often tell when a writer has “checked out.” Thanks for this!

  7. Awsome post! I loved the part about being impassioned by your story and driven to stay up at night writing it. I find it difficult to sit down to write sometimes, sometimes I get the “Glaze” other times magic happens and the hours slip away. Your next post should be on helping us all find the magic before we sit LOL.

    Thanks for the inspiration,
    Matt H.

  8. I loved your post and it made me realize why my character had suddenly gone flat. I love to write with passion and flourish but realized I was feeling rushed at the expense of my storyline. I will file this in the back of my brain and use it when my characters aren’t communicating in my best style. Thank you!

  9. it’s a wonderful post, i am really inspired by the line “If your writing doesn’t keep you up nights, it won’t keep anyone else up either”. I am also trying to write a story but i have no words for it…simply because it looks amazing when i imagine it but i am not able to put the whole into words .. thnx for this post..

  10. Your best post ever, and that’s saying something! Words-the emotions they evoke, the mind-pictures they paint, the heartache, joy, and hope they offer, and especially the music they sing, are one of God’s greatest gifts. My library is filled with books by favorite authors who have captured this magic of passion. When I am having a hard time returning to my WIP after days of marketing, etc., I pull out a book and turn to a favorite passage. Though our styles and voices are different, within moments, I have found the way back to my own passion. Am eagerly waiting for your next post.

    Dianne Price

  11. Rather than try to inject passion into my written work, I aim to infuse passion into the act of writing. If I can imagine it and then get in the flow, the results are more emotional, passionate, vibrant. Looking forward to your series of posts on ways to add passion into our written work.

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