Today’s guest post is from author Daryl Rothman:
There’s nothing like good fiction. Never am I more inspired to write something good than immediately after reading something good. But a funny thing has happened along the way.
My best writing, the greatest surges of fiction/writing inspiration, occurred after reading great nonfiction. Not only was it inspiring me, it was making me write better. But why? And how can it help your writing too?
Creative nonfiction is the fastest-growing genre in the literary world and refers to a writing style usually associated with fiction or poetry to report on actual persons, places, or events. I primarily pen fiction, and concur it is “a world of freedom,” but this for me can be a blessing and a curse, and which elicits at times a corresponding excess in my prose.
Enter Creative Nonfiction
Great nonfiction writers extract from an unalterable history a tale all their own. They make nonfiction as compelling as fiction, and I often find myself wishing I could make my fiction as compelling as their nonfiction. But what are those traits that have become indispensable tools in the crafting of my best work?
Great Characters. Great nonfiction builds upon exacting research and artful presentation to deliver great characters. Erik Larson’s Thunderstruck tells the story “of two men—Hawley Crippen, a very unlikely murderer, and Guglielmo Marconi, the obsessive creator of a seemingly supernatural means of communication—whose lives intersect during one of the greatest criminal chases of all time.” I knew nothing at all of Crippen (despite my fascination with the Ripper murders, to which aspects of Crippen’s saga would ultimately draw comparisons) and little of Marconi. Larson writes:
Another man might have decided the physicists were right—that long-range communication was impossible. But Marconi saw no limits. He fell back on trial and error, at a level of intensity that verged on obsession.
Informative, but also seasoned with key ingredients as to the recipe of Marconi’s character. The “information” Larson presents presages so much of what is to come. Great nonfiction is powered by a foundation of truth—and elevated by great storytelling. The result is fantastic—a story possessing the greatest virtues of fiction and nonfiction alike: the depth of character and skilled narrative of the former, and the inevitable restraint and clarity of the latter.
And the lessons for fiction writers are tangible. Just as good nonfiction is anchored upon a foundation of spare, informational prose but expands into compelling story, good fiction maintains its foundation of riveting story and characters while refraining from excess.
Setting the Stage. Not only does great nonfiction present compelling characters, it also animates the life and times and world in which they live. We are given sufficient detail to see this world, but not so much as to be blinded by it and lose focus on story and character.
As Marconi takes his wireless pursuits to new heights—literally—Larson describes a scene atop the towering Oceanside cliffs of Cape Cod.
Next Cook led him a few miles south to a parcel of land just outside South Wellfleet, consisting of eight acres atop a 130-foot cliff which overlooked the same beach along which Thoreau had walked half a century earlier. Buffeted by wind, now Marconi walked the ground. The land in all directions had been shaved to a stubble by gales and by loggers who over the previous century had stripped it to provide lumber for ship-builders . . . If he stood facing east, all he saw was the great spread of the Atlantic. As Thoreau observed, “There was nothing but that savage ocean between us and Europe.”
That elusive balance: we are not merely told that Marconi and his men have journeyed to the top of a cliff. We know where, see where, and we know why (he is continuing his relentless pursuit of wireless, and hoping this location will finally bring success).
What about Thoreau? Is he directly relevant to Marconi’s story? Not really. But it evokes a sense of the gravity with which the moment was freighted for Marconi. Its inclusion retains fidelity to fact (Thoreau really did traverse that stretch of land, and really did say that of the Atlantic), but also elevates the storytelling.
Fiction authors: paint a vivid picture by presenting the “facts,” then invigorate it with deft, but still restrained, touches.
As we begin to know Crippen, we also begin to see the world in which he lives, the backdrop against which his unthinkable crime shall be committed.
But these fears and pressures existed as background tremolo, audible mainly to the writers, journalists and reformers who made it their business to listen. . . . The Metropolitan Police, known more commonly as Scotland Yard, had grown larger and moved to new headquarters . . . while excavating its foundation, in the midst of the terror raised by Jack the Ripper, workers had found the torso of a woman, without head, arms or legs, triggering fears that this too had been Jack’s work.
Once more Larson has maintained literary equilibrium: fidelity to truth and fact, yet a leveraging of said truth in a manner that heightens tension and instills in the reader a greater feel for the time.
Seek a similar balance. Build tension and evoke the backdrop and subplots of your tale. But restrain your narrative with “truth.” Not real truth, mind you, for you write fiction—but with the truth of your character, your story.
Fresh Angles. Near the climax, Larson relays a most extraordinary moment, when murderer and now fugitive Crippen is discovered by the ship’s captain listening in fascination to the “electric crackle” of the Marconi equipment on the ship’s deck.
Crippen turned to him and exclaimed, ‘What a wonderful invention it is!’ Kendall could only smile and agree.
Early in the book we learn that the stories are indeed on a collision course.
Within twenty-four hours Captain Kendall would discover that his ship had become the most vessel afloat and that he himself had become the subject of breakfast conversation from Broadway in New York to Piccadilly in London. He had stepped into the intersection of two wildly disparate stories, whose collision on his ship in this time, the end of the Edwardian era, would exert influence on the world for the century to come.
If it is true that “there is nothing new under the sun,” that entirely original story lines are difficult to come by, fret not—you may and you must still pursue avenues of ingenuity. A different point of view. New voices. A fresh angle. Artfully interweave storylines; make them collide.
Peruse examples of good nonfiction; there is an ample trove from which to sample. See if they can bolster your own writing. I wager they will, but if not, you’ll have at least enjoyed some good reading (how doing so does not bolster one’s writing, I do not confess to know).
So what do you think? Is leaning on nonfiction to aid fiction writing a crazy idea? Please share your thoughts in comments. Best wishes!
Daryl Rothman is a father, author and early childhood leader. His website features his blog, short stories, publications, guest interviews, and news about his novels, and he has guest-blogged for other authors and publications. From early in life he harbored three aspirations: become a father, become a writer, and become a ballplayer for his hometown Cardinals. He is blessed to have achieved the first, is happily continuing his journey regarding the second and he will neither confirm nor deny holding out hope for the third. Connect with him here on LinkedIn