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Searching for the Poetry in Story

Searching for the Poetry in Story

December 23, 2015

Today Robin Patchen takes a look at cadence and rhythm as we begin to wrap up attack on Fatal Flaw #12:…

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Writers, Wipe That Smile off Your Page

Writers, Wipe That Smile off Your Page

November 25, 2015

This week editor Robin Patchen wraps up our look at Fatal Flaw #11 – Pesky Adverbs and Weasel Words. If you’ve missed…

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Infusing Your Settings with Emotion

Infusing Your Settings with Emotion

October 28, 2015

Editor Robin Patchen wraps up our look at fatal flaw #10: Description Deficiencies and Excesses (If you’ve missed the other posts…

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How Writers Can Avoid “Underwriting” Emotions

How Writers Can Avoid “Underwriting” Emotions

September 23, 2015

This month our editors are tackling Fatal Flaw #9—Underwriting. Too often necessary information is left out of a scene, leaving…

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How Writers Can Seek and Destroy Banal and Obvious Dialog      

How Writers Can Seek and Destroy Banal and Obvious Dialog      

August 26, 2015

This month our editors have attacked Fatal Flaw # 8: Flawed Dialog Construction. Dialog is a tricky component to master in…

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Layering Tension in Happyland

Layering Tension in Happyland

July 22, 2015

This month we’ve been attacking Fatal Flaw #7—Lack of Pacing and Tension. Tension is crucial in a story. Without it, readers…

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How Fiction Writers Can Show Emotions in Their Characters in Effective Ways

How Fiction Writers Can Show Emotions in Their Characters in Effective Ways

June 24, 2015

Editor Robin Patchen wraps up our examination of Fatal Flaw: # 6 Show, Don’t Tell. Writers often succumb to this fatal flaw…

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Staying in Character: The Convergence of POV and Voice

Staying in Character: The Convergence of POV and Voice

May 27, 2015

We’re wrapping up our look this month into Fatal Flaw #5: POV Violations. And there are many. POV “rules” aren’t hard…

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Backstory in Action

Backstory in Action

April 22, 2015

This week editor Robin Patchen tackles Fatal Flaw #4—Too Much Backstory. In this month’s posts, we’ve been looking at the pitfalls…

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